Update for ch1

So I did a major overhaul of a lot of the writing for ch1 mostly near the ending decision parts after returning to the village for the festival, changing almost all options completely

I felt a lot of the choices were 1. not as well written as I could and 2. I felt a lot of the decisions felt unimpactful (some were just basically "you die" and i hated that). I wanted to make each decision feel impactful and reveal something more about the story. I hope these updates do that. 

For now I feel these are good enough for ch1 and do not require any rewriting, so I will now begin my work on ch2.  Of course I will work to fix any issues that come up with but major writing fixes I feel are done. 

Thank you.